Project Space Reflection
The place that I decided
to analyze was Whole Foods. The reason I choose this place was because I was
not familiar with it and it made me uncomfortable because of the subculture it
had and I felt that if I was not familiar with the place I would have a different
perspective and I did. What interested me about this place was how it is only being
placed in higher income communities than lower income communities. I personally
do not a personal connection to it but my sister shops there so I had some of her
input in my presentation. How I researched my place was by finding out the
history on their Whole Foods home page and going to my location and exploring
the market.
My writing process for project Space was
different from Project Web due the fact that in space I felt like I had much
more of better understanding because we had to go an observe our space than in
web where it was more research to be done than analysis. How Project Web and
Space are the same was that I still have do have an opinion in order to support
my thesis and we have to present to the class like in Project Web but now
alone.
My writing processed has
changed a bit I feel like now instead of writing a rough draft and a final
draft this time I wrote two rough drafts and a final. How I began writing my
essay was looking for the history of the place I was observing then when I knew
a little bit about the place I went to
observe it. I did not procrastinate I felt like I was on time with the due
dates and I even had an extra weekend to rewrite my first draft. The easiest
part about writing this essay was that we had to give a lot of descriptive
detail and I felt like I accomplished that in my essay. The most difficult part
for me was making my essay longer but when we had a group discussion in office
hours I wrote many notes down and when I went home I reread them and I fixed my
essay and added more things and my essay got longer.
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